Deceiving rivers — Summary

A beautiful song, Such a sweet melody.

Enchanting voices, Leading to the sea.

A bottomless pit, Filled with water.

A tranquil paradise, Immersed in laughter.

Warm welcomes, Cries of delight.

When we're submerged, We're hidden from light.

Knowing glances, Shared secrets.

As the dwellers, Come to meet us.

In an attempt to speak, I open my mouth.

But no noise is heard, As I drown.

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The poem starts out like an invitation. A beautiful song and enchanting voices lead the speaker toward the sea, and the subtitle, "Deceiving rivers," warns us early that something isn't what it seems. The water is described as a "tranquil paradise" full of laughter, warm welcomes and cries of delight. Everything sounds friendly, even exciting.

But small details unsettle that picture. The water is a "bottomless pit," and being submerged means being "hidden from light." The "knowing glances" and "shared secrets" of the dwellers feel less like friendship and more like a trap everyone else already understands. The final stanzas turn sharply: the speaker tries to speak and no sound comes out, because they are drowning.

The mood moves from dreamy and seductive to quietly chilling. The speaker seems lured in by something that promised belonging, and the short, simple lines make the sudden silence at the end hit harder. The title's casual goodbye adds a dark, ironic edge.

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