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Asta La Vista BabyContemplative

Eye capturing, Yet deceiving.

Soul, Madness, Whole, Disaster.

Heart entrapped, Mind enraptured.

Unknown, Feelings, Just utter, Longing.

Loving, Leaving.

Sad, Endings, No, Beginning.

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Told in short, clipped fragments, the poem sketches a brief love that burns fast and collapses. It begins with a glance that grabs the speaker's attention but also misleads. From there, the pairs of words pull in opposite directions: "soul" against "madness," "whole" against "disaster." Being drawn to someone seems to promise completeness, yet the poem suggests it brings chaos instead.

The speaker feels trapped and dazzled at once. The heart is "entrapped" while the mind is "enraptured," so the speaker is caught between wanting and being stuck. The middle lines, with their scattered words like "unknown" and "longing," read like feelings the speaker can't quite organize. The title, a playful twist on a famous farewell, adds a flicker of bittersweet humor, as if the speaker is putting on a brave face.

The mood is wistful and heavy. The final stanza, "Sad, / Endings, / No, / Beginning," leaves the sense of a love that never got a real start, and the sparse, broken lines make the ache feel quiet but unresolved.

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