Perfect — Poem analysis

Asta La Vista BabyContemplative

Being flawed, It's only human.

So alien are those, Who have no compassion.

Commands should be followed, Because of respect.

Not a deep fear, Of becoming a reject.

Fairytales end, With a happy pair.

But all hearts will, Continously shed tears.

Endings can never, Truly come.

Until I'm below ground, And life's finally done.

I've got to get, All my feelings.

I've got to mask them, With false meanings.

In the moonlight, When I close my eyes.

Sleep doesn't wash away, The beautiful night.

I gaze at the sky, An endless stretch.

Stars scattered, An arranged mess.

Yet clouds float by, While the sun's long set.

Everything tainted, Is still perfect.

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Perfection usually means having nothing wrong with it. «Perfect» spends sixteen short couplets quietly taking that idea apart. Its final line, "Everything tainted / Is still perfect," is a paradox that the earlier stanzas have been preparing, one blunt statement at a time.

The poem opens like a list of rules for living: "Being flawed, / It's only human." People without compassion are "alien." Commands should be obeyed "Because of respect." Then comes a line that sounds a little too eager to deny something: "Not a deep fear, / Of becoming a reject." Nobody mentions a fear of rejection unless it is on their mind. The speaker seems to be reassuring themselves, and the neat moral about respect starts to look like a way of fitting in. The fairytale couplet pushes the doubt further. Fairytales end "With a happy pair," but real hearts "shed tears," and the poem refuses the tidy ending. Endings "can never / Truly come" until the speaker is "below ground." The idea of a final full stop is pushed all the way out to death.

The poem then turns inward. "I've got to get, / All my feelings" breaks off before it says what to do with them, and the next couplet supplies the answer: "I've got to mask them, / With false meanings." The repeated "I've got to" sounds like an obligation the speaker has taken on, not a choice. This is where the rules of the opening stanzas begin to cost something. Following commands and avoiding rejection means hiding what you feel behind a more acceptable meaning.

The last third moves outdoors, and the imagery gets richer as the speaker's voice relaxes. With eyes closed in the moonlight, "Sleep doesn't wash away / The beautiful night." That can be read as a memory that survives sleep, or as a sleeplessness that is oddly not unwelcome. The sky is "An endless stretch" with "Stars scattered, / An arranged mess," an oxymoron that holds the poem's whole argument in three words, because disorder can still look designed. Then comes the strangest picture: "clouds float by / While the sun's long set." Clouds drifting across a dark sky are a small blemish on a clear night, yet the speaker keeps looking. The sky is not flawless, and it moves the speaker more than the neat rules did.

The form suits this plainness. Every stanza is a two-line unit of short, mostly end-stopped lines, which gives the poem the feel of a list of confessions or private notes. Rhyme is loose and often partial: "respect" and "reject" chime, "feelings" and "meanings" match, and "pair" and "tears," "stretch" and "mess" are near-rhymes. The pairing of "respect" and "reject" is neat, as though the speaker had learned the tidy version by heart. The rhythm is uneven, with two or three stresses a line, and some breaks fall awkwardly, as in "But all hearts will, / Continously shed tears," where the line stops mid-thought. These small stumbles fit a poem about imperfection and keep it from sounding polished. Even the title carries this doubt. The guillemets around «Perfect» hold the word at arm's length, like a label someone else has attached.

The poem matters because it ends by revising its own opening instead of resolving it. "Being flawed" is first treated as a human excuse, and by the end "tainted" things are called perfect, so perfection has been redefined to include the stains. It does this in plain, short-lined language, with no elaborate vocabulary, which makes it easy to approach. Readers who feel pressure to look flawless or to mask what they feel may recognise the speaker. The pen name, a playful respelling of a farewell phrase, also fits a poem so concerned with endings, though that link is only an inference. What the poem finally offers is a way of looking: the night sky, mess and clouds included, is already enough.

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