A Thin, Bright Line — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 22.09.2009Dreamy

Last night you came In my dreams. You were sitting on a chair And glanced sideways At me, standing.

You looked young and slightly plumb. You never were plumb, I thought in my dream, Amused.

You talked to me; kind words - And smiled gently, with warmth. Listening, I wondered happily How you had changed.

In my dream, I remember I wished, wistfully At the images beginning to fade That it wasn't a dream.

But then - As it narrowed to a thin bright line And then to a receding dot In a pitch black screen -

A dove sitting on the window sill Rose, in a flurry of wings.

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The speaker dreams of someone they clearly miss. The person sits on a chair, glances sideways, and speaks kind words with a warm smile. The speaker is amused to notice the figure looks young and a little plump, though "you never were plumb," and quietly marvels at how much they have changed. The poem never says who this person is or why they are absent, so the reader has to infer a loss or a long separation from the longing in the speaker's voice.

The feeling is tender and happy at first, then wistful. As the images start to fade, the speaker wishes it weren't a dream. The picture shrinks to a thin bright line, then a dot, then black, like a screen switching off. The ending is sudden and quiet: a dove on the window sill flies up in a flurry of wings. It could be the real world intruding on the dream, or a small sign of peace. The mood is soft, nostalgic, and gently sad.

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