Bird Watching — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 15.11.2009Anxious

If I remember correctly, It began at the temples. I thought it most distinguished Mature, even attractive - Though it was the foreboding of things to come.

Over decades, it spread gradually Over the head, face and chest. Now I notice it appearing On my forearm, in ones and twos.

It took away the lustre in my eyes, Strength in my limbs - The slowing down of the systems Is ominous than ever.

It is evening; sitting in my armchair, I look at the sunlight slanting, Shadows lengthening, Night creeping up, cold.

I stretch my legs, take another sip Of the Whisky.

He will come When wind starts Rattling the windows, Swirling up dust Settling it gently on this floor When rain falls pitter-patter When fireflies start to dance - Silently he will come On the wings of the Great Horned Owl.

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The speaker is an old man looking back at his own ageing. It starts with something small: grey hair at the temples, which he once found distinguished, even attractive. Over the years it spreads across his head, face and chest, and now it appears on his forearm. Alongside it come duller eyes, weaker limbs and a body that is slowing down.

The poem then settles into an evening scene. He sits in his armchair with a glass of whisky, watching the light slant and the shadows lengthen. These are quiet images of a day, and a life, drawing to a close.

In the last stanza, death is pictured as a visitor who will arrive silently on the wings of a Great Horned Owl. The mood is calm and resigned rather than panicked. The speaker sounds wistful and a little wry, and he seems to wait for the end with acceptance, even a gentle sense of ease.

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