The Flower Market — Poem analysis

Balachandran VTrivandrum 25.02.2010Dreamy

Do not leave, my friend, do not Leave me with just a glance. Do not just caress me and leave Do not just pick me up and smell My fragrance and throw me back in the basket.

I have been plucked, tenderly With care not to smudge or crush My lovely petals even now damp with dew I wait for thee to hold me to your chest And take in deep all I have to offer Look, look at my colour, my grace and beauty Smell me deep, my sweet scent!

Let me adorn your beloved's head Or soothe her eyes, still, in the pot. Let me remind her of you, of your love For all thats worth in the world is just love.

This is all I have to offer thee, my friend My life, though it be brief. Take me, my friend, let me be A fleeting memory and later Scatter me to the winds. What more do I need What more to fulfill What more be the purpose of my life?

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Most poems about flowers are written by someone standing over them, admiring. In "The Flower Market," Balachandran V reverses that and lets the flower speak, and what it offers is a plea rather than a boast. Its first words are a double refusal, "Do not leave, my friend, do not / Leave me with just a glance," and the whole poem grows out of that fear of being noticed but never truly received.

The opening stanza runs on repetition. "Do not" returns again and again, and each time the gesture it names gets more casual: a glance, a caress, a sniff followed by being thrown "back in the basket." The movement runs from admiration to disposal, and the little word "just" does much of the work, shrinking each act into something merely passing. The flower is not simply asking to be bought. It wants attention that costs the visitor something, to be taken in "deep."

In the second stanza complaint turns into offering, and the senses open one by one: touch in "tenderly," sight in "my colour, my grace and beauty," smell in "my sweet scent." The most delicate image is the petals "even now damp with dew," a freshness that already hints at its own ending. The phrase "plucked, tenderly / With care not to smudge or crush" is quietly uneasy. Picking a flower is a kind of taking, yet the speaker describes it as gentle, as if gratitude and grievance sat side by side. The urgent commands, "Look, look" and "Smell me deep," make the flower sound less like stock on display and more like someone who cannot hold back.

In the third stanza the flower imagines what it might become. It would "adorn your beloved's head" or "soothe her eyes," and it does not cast itself as the hero of the love story. It wants to be a go-between, something that will "remind her of you." The line "still, in the pot" is ambiguous. It could mean the flower would serve even if kept in water, or that it would stay quietly in a vase. Either way, the speaker asks for very little. Then comes the poem's one plain statement of belief: "For all thats worth in the world is just love." Here "just" has changed sides. In the first stanza it meant "merely" and made things smaller. Here it means "nothing but" and makes love enormous. The poem's argument is carried by that single word.

The final stanza accepts the flower's brevity. "My life, though it be brief" is followed by the wish to be "a fleeting memory" and then to be scattered "to the winds." The last three lines are questions that need no answer: "What more do I need / What more to fulfill / What more be the purpose of my life?" They echo the opening "Do not," but fear has become contentment. The flower no longer pleads against being left. It declares that being given away is its purpose.

The form suits this plainness. The poem is free verse with no rhyme scheme, and its lines vary in length, following the breath of someone speaking rather than the beat of a fixed meter. Stanzas of five, seven, four and eight lines give it the loose shape of a spoken appeal. The old-fashioned "thee" sits beside the everyday "your," so the voice wavers between prayer and intimate conversation. That is a little uneven, but it fits a speaker who is both reverent and pleading.

The poem matters because it uses a small, ordinary scene, a flower in a basket, for a large human question: what makes a short life worth something? Read literally, it is a flower speaking to a passerby. Read more widely, it could be anyone who wants to be valued fully rather than glanced at, and who finds meaning in giving themselves away. The poem is signed "Trivandrum 25.02.2010," but nothing in it depends on that detail. Its appeal is that the flower asks for so little and means so much by it.

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