Friend — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 06.08.2010Romantic

Did you notice how, suddenly My voice thickened with pleasure? My eyes softened with happiness? My words brimmed with pride My eyes shone with love - As you crossed the threshold I pointed at you and said - “That’s my friend”!

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Here, a speaker describes the moment a friend walks through a door and is introduced to others. The poem is built as a string of questions: did you notice my voice thicken, my eyes soften, my words fill with pride? Each question points to a feeling the speaker couldn't hide. Only at the end do we hear the actual words, simple and short: "That's my friend!"

What the speaker feels is a quiet, overflowing pride in the friendship. The body seems to speak before the sentence does. Voice, eyes and words all change, and the repeated mention of eyes, first softened and then shining with love, suggests how deeply the feeling runs. The poem is also a gentle address to the friend, as if the speaker is saying, "I hope you saw how much you mean to me."

The mood is warm, tender and a little shy. Holding back the plain statement until the final line gives it extra weight, and the exclamation mark lets the joy finally spill out.

Read also

More by Balachandran V

All poems
SadBalachandran V

A bit more time

Listening to friends talking about their mothers; One said – “She’s eighty, still hale and hearty, Got to go home for dinner with her”. Before he could continue, the other said,
CheerfulBalachandran V

Cycling on a Sunday Morning

Laboured breath, squeaking knees Crunching pain in the lower back Stench of garbage ride up the nose. Passing by people, sleepy dogs
AnxiousBalachandran V

At the door

Fleeing train, lands rush past It swings and sways, thunders and clangs. Gripping on to the hand rails I swing and sway in time.