Without Sorrow — Summary

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Stiff was the stringed bow as it was laid to rest Upon the pile of ferns after a long hard test

The quiver empty and the arrow about The beast had fought, yes it was stout

A hunger had settled upon my community Til it was left only to me to do what I could see

To make it through the winter A puff of smoke from my mouth stood starkly in the air Reminded me of last night's frost and the snow in my daughter's hair

It's not a woman's place to hunt for her families table A husband lost to a war so unstable

The blood stood bright against the white of the snow Warm almost comforting against the sudden cold I cut and I skinned right straight to the bone

The sled wiped off from it's layer of white my children helped me load the food without a fight

A rabbit today a mammoth tomorrow

Helping my community, a woman

Without sorrow

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A woman takes up a bow and hunts because her community is starving and no one else is left to do it. The poem follows her through the whole task: the tired bow laid on the ferns, the empty quiver, the fight with the animal, and then the cutting and skinning, ending with her children helping to load the sled.

She seems practical and steady more than anything. She admits that hunting isn't seen as "a woman's place," and she mentions her husband, lost to war, but she doesn't dwell on either. The details she notices are small and physical: her breath in the cold air, the frost, the snow in her daughter's hair, the warmth of the blood against the white.

The mood is quiet, determined, and a little hopeful. The title, "Without Sorrow," and the closing lines suggest she has put grief aside and found pride in providing. The line "A rabbit today a mammoth tomorrow" shows her confidence growing, as if this first success has made her believe she can handle more.

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