I may be a corpse — Summary

Today I woke up cold . I stood up and my limbs were stiff . As stiff as terrible restaurant bread .

I got dressed and went to work only to be met by strange and terrified looks . My boss called me into his office . He was a strong man .

But upon sight of me he turned pale as if he had seen a corpse . He told me to have the day off . So I decided to go to a date . When she saw me she spewed vomit all over our table and shrieked and ran away . I went home burdened with a heavy sadness . Why did everyone look at me like I was some freak ??

I decided to look in a mirror to see what they saw . And too my shock I was met with a pale grotesque corpse looking back .

I think I may be a corpse . My lifeless face pale as if it were the dead middle of winter . My limbs are stiff with rigor mortis . My eyes gray as for the light has faded from them .

I'm a corpse, aren't I ??

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The speaker wakes up cold and stiff, then watches everyone around them react with horror: coworkers stare, the boss goes pale, and a date vomits and runs off. Only when the speaker checks a mirror does the cause appear, a pale, grotesque, corpse-like face. By the end, the speaker is left asking, "I'm a corpse, aren't I ??"

The tone is oddly flat and darkly funny. Comparing stiff limbs to "terrible restaurant bread" is a joke placed right beside something grim, and the plain, matter-of-fact way the speaker narrates makes the situation feel more absurd. But the humor slips as the day goes on. The speaker feels "a heavy sadness" and wonders why people treat them like a freak, which gives the poem a real sting of loneliness and rejection.

You could read it literally, as a strange comic story, or as a picture of feeling numb, drained, or invisible to the living. The poem's last question is unsettled, and it leaves you unsure which reading the speaker believes.

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