Lord of Misrule — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

In her image the sun made me round and ornately petaled,

burning and erupting in feathery plumes. Don’t stare!

I was the Sun King. Shadows radiated away from me

like the teeth of my enemies strung on a reckless necklace.

That’s not a mugger’s knife but a prisoner of earth’s desperate attempt

to pick my lock. I was, after all, the state. Why must I now perform

for the forgotten and forgettable? Why have I not limped like a blimp

into the humped clouds? I can’t seem to shake this legacy of lead,

asteroids roaring in the vacuum of my farcical heart.

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Dave Bonta's "Lord of Misrule" begins with a boast and ends with a confession. The speaker starts as something radiant, "round and ornately petaled," "burning and erupting / in feathery plumes," and ends with a "farcical heart" full of roaring debris. The poem never says outright what the speaker is. The petals suggest a sunflower, the plumes suggest solar flares, and the claim "I was the Sun King" suggests a monarch. Rather than choosing, the poem lets all three overlap, and that blur is part of its fun. What stays constant is the arc: a being who once felt like the centre of everything now has to "perform / for the forgotten and forgettable."

The title sets the tone. The Lord of Misrule was the mock king appointed to preside over midwinter revels in medieval and Tudor England, a figure whose authority was a game and lasted only as long as the festival. By calling its speaker this, the poem warns us that the grandeur in the opening lines is already a costume. The "Sun King" is a nickname most famously tied to Louis XIV, and "I was, after all, / the state" echoes the line often attributed to him, "L'état, c'est moi." The speaker borrows the language of absolute power, but the title keeps pulling it toward pantomime.

The poem's imagery is at its best when it turns light into menace. "Shadows radiated away from me" is a neat reversal, since a sun should send out light, yet here the glory casts darkness on everything around it. The next image is violent: the shadows are "like the teeth of my enemies / strung on a reckless necklace." A sun's rays become a trophy of conquest. Then comes a sudden deflation. "That's not a mugger's knife / but a prisoner of earth's desperate attempt / to pick my lock" has an offhand, defensive tone, like a king insisting that a threat is beneath notice. The image is deliberately hard to pin down, but it suggests the speaker is rattled and brushing aside something that has already got through.

The formal choices support this slide from swagger to unease. The poem is unrhymed free verse in nine neat couplets, but the sentences keep tripping over the line breaks. "I was, after all, / the state" holds the claim to power across a pause, so the word "state" lands with a little thud of self-importance. Early on the speaker barks short commands ("Don't stare!") and makes flat statements in the past tense. After "Why must I now perform," the poem turns to questions, and the confidence cracks.

Sound is where the poem turns comic. "Why have I not limped like a blimp / into the humped clouds?" is almost a nursery rhyme, with its chiming "limped" and "blimp" and the lumpy "humped." A blimp is a slow, swollen thing, so the speaker's wish to drift gracelessly out of sight is both pathetic and funny. The same mock-grandeur appears in "forgotten and forgettable," where the second word is a spiteful little upgrade of the first. The speaker is contemptuous of the audience and also afraid of being one of them.

The ending turns the poem's physical imagery into something heavier. "Legacy of lead" is a bitter pun on the idea of a king's legacy, which here is something dense and poisonous that cannot be shaken off. Then come "asteroids roaring in the vacuum / of my farcical heart." The image is contradictory on purpose, since a vacuum carries no sound, so the roaring is imaginary. The speaker's inner noise, the memory of importance, has no medium to travel through and no one to hear it. "Farcical" is the key word. The speaker has seen the joke and cannot stop being the butt of it.

What makes the poem worth reading is how it makes a fallen ego both ridiculous and sympathetic. It would be easy to mock a deposed Sun King, and the poem does, through the blimp and the title. But the last lines let some real pain through. The speaker's greatness was never earned and cannot be put down, and so becomes a weight, a legacy of lead. The poem suggests that a self built around being looked at has nowhere to go when the looking stops.

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