Over the Hills — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Dear Todd,

I was taking the broom for a slow shuffle around the dining room when I heard the fluting of wild swans & rushed out, scanning the sky till I spotted the long wedge high above the hollow, heading north. They were as dark against the sky as we must be to them against the ground, pausing in our Sunday labors, mouths open as the swans pass over the train tracks & the river, over the interstate & the quarry’s enormous silent megaphone, over a cardinal singing in a barberry hedge, over junker cars & houses sheathed in fading asphalt shingles, over old carpets left out in the yard to kill the grass where a vegetable garden will go, over the burrows of amorous woodchucks and the leaf nests of squirrels, over sheets & long johns flapping on the line. The swans seemed tireless. Their one refrain might as well have been “Over the Hills & Far Away,” as in the Burl Ives song about the piper’s son. They’d keep it up long past the last tree, I knew — until the land cleared of almost all clutter, there where the darkness disappears for months. I went back to my sweeping, assembled the dust from every corner, then opened the door & ushered that small blue hill into the wind.

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Written as a letter to a friend, the poem catches a small, ordinary moment: the speaker is sweeping the dining room when he hears wild swans and hurries outside to watch them fly north. What follows is a long, flowing sentence that follows the birds over everything below, from train tracks and a quarry to junker cars, rugs laid out on the grass, woodchuck burrows and laundry on the line. The swans see a world of small human clutter, and the speaker imagines himself and his neighbors as dark specks, mouths open, looking up.

The mood is quiet wonder with a light, humorous touch. The speaker doesn't treat the swans as grander than his own life; he links them to a folk song and to his chores. The ending is gentle. He returns to sweeping and sweeps the dust out the door, calling it "that small blue hill." His own tiny hill echoes the far-off ones the swans are crossing.

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