Open-Backed Banjo — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

I am untroubled by serpents or the marinated feet of pigs. I bear no antipathy toward bears or the bees they bedevil, & the devil never tempts me to any evil I can’t invent on my own (forgive me if I don’t delve into the details). What makes me break down is a banjo, lonesome as our only god the clock but with two hands, both of them fast. Looking in its open back can be disconcerting: What makes it go? There’s nothing but a bare rod & the smell of rain. Where’s the balance wheel? The escapement? The gear train? It calls to me, the ghost in its machine. Play it, son! Make it ring like a hammer on steel & rattle like a Gatling gun until it smokes.

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The speaker starts by listing everything that doesn't frighten him: snakes, pigs' feet, bears, even the devil, whose temptations he says he can invent perfectly well himself. It's a joking, swaggering opening, but it sets up a surprise. What does shake him is a banjo.

He compares it to a clock, "lonesome" but with two fast hands, and then peers into its open back like someone opening a watch. Where are the gears, the escapement, the balance wheel? Instead he finds only a bare rod and "the smell of rain." The mechanism he expects isn't there, and the music seems to come from something unseen, a "ghost in its machine."

The mood shifts from wry humor to wonder and longing. The last lines sound like a voice urging someone on: play it, make it ring and rattle "until it smokes." The poem ends in noise and heat, suggesting that the banjo's mystery is something to feel, not take apart.

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