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Dave BontaContemplative

A pile of shed garments on the hardwood floor rising in layers of ever thinner firmament, from denim to lightest cotton to breath- less silk & a trickle of sunlight spilling through a crack in the curtains. While the prim unwrinkled bed, the generic night- stand pinned under a thick phone book & the blank TV atop a chest of drawers all resist engagement: nothing to capture the enchanted gaze or even the bemused appraisal. No stage hand could stand such inattention to properties, such utter abandon as this room’s lone occupant displays.

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The poem looks at a hotel-like bedroom just after someone has undressed, and it keeps its attention on the things around the person rather than the person. The discarded clothes pile up on the floor in layers, heavy denim at the bottom and thin silk on top, and the speaker treats them almost like sky ("firmament"). A thin line of sunlight slips in through the curtains. Everything else in the room is dull and neat: the made bed, the ordinary nightstand, the blank TV. None of it invites a second look.

The speaker's tone is wry and quietly admiring. The last lines imagine a stage hand who would never tolerate such carelessness about props, yet the room's one occupant shows "utter abandon." The poem suggests that the person, even unseen, is the only thing in the room with life and freedom. The mood is intimate, still, and a little playful, with the body's presence felt entirely through what it left behind.

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