Hit the Lights — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

As long as the lights stay on, we’re stuck. You can’t sprout wings or rake me with sudden claws. I can’t turn into a storm-tossed tree or an otter slippery as sin.

In the light, we are smaller than life. Our cries are nothing but failed words & our sighs & gasps might just as well have been emitted by some tired engine.

Light always wants to pin us down, to make nakedness into a mere absence of clothes, a sleight-of-hand devoid of actual magic. It strands us in our separate flesh.

Hit the lights & let’s get out of this walled garden! Let our bodies return to their original habitat. There’s a rusty gate at the end of the path, & the whole dark forest just beyond.

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Bright light, the speaker argues, keeps lovers stuck as they are. Under it, two people can't imagine themselves as winged, clawed, storm-tossed or slippery. Their cries sound like failed words, their sighs like a tired engine, and nakedness shrinks to "a mere absence of clothes," a magic trick with no magic in it.

So the poem turns into an invitation: hit the lights. Darkness becomes a way back to the body's "original habitat," a place older and wilder than the lit room, which the speaker calls a "walled garden." Desire here is partly about transformation, about becoming animal, element, something more than a separate self.

The mood is playful, intimate, and a little daring. The closing image of a rusty gate and the dark forest beyond feels both inviting and slightly dangerous, as though the speaker is leading the way out and hoping the other person will follow.

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