White Night — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Bones aren’t this color. Their darkness is on the inside, not the outside.

This is the white of a tunnel in a paraffin candle from which the wick has been pulled:

burning isn’t an option, you have to keep moving to stay ahead of the cold on its pale horse.

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Dave Bonta's "White Night" begins by correcting itself. Bones, the speaker says, aren't this color, because their darkness is hidden inside. The whiteness being described is something else, and the poem finds its comparison in a candle: the pale, hollow channel left in paraffin after the wick has been pulled out. It's an eerie image of something that once could burn and now can't.

That emptiness sets the mood. "Burning isn't an option" suggests a landscape or a state of mind with no warmth to draw on, so the only defense is to keep moving. The cold arrives "on its pale horse," an image that echoes death riding behind, though the poem doesn't spell this out. The speaker seems less panicked than watchful and weary, aware of danger close behind. The feeling is quiet, stark, and chilly, like a night so white and still that stopping would be the real risk.

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