England by Rail — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

i. A crane in a scrap metal yard unclenches a great, magnetic claw. Breast-shaped mounds of soil sit two fields away from the pit, a future fish pond. Gulls glean in the plow’s dark wake. A large, white dog follows two boys along a dry creek while we in our fast train hurtle backwards over the sleepers in their gravel beds.

ii. A signal goes out & we creep slowly through the night so the driver can inspect the track. Three stops ahead, another train catches fire & we wait for more than an hour on some siding between stations. The darkness is busy with our reflections. We move about looking for outlets to recharge our mobile phones. Here & there an anonymous light glimmers orange or blue.

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The first section is a series of glimpses from a train window: a crane's magnetic claw letting go, mounds of soil beside a future fish pond, gulls following a plow, a white dog trailing two boys. The images are small and ordinary, and the speaker doesn't comment on them. The strangest line comes at the end, when the fast train seems to "hurtle backwards," as if the landscape is being pulled away from the passengers rather than approached.

In the second section the train slows, then stops. A fire on another train leaves everyone waiting on a siding in the dark. The window turns into a mirror, so the passengers see only their own reflections, and they wander around hunting for places to charge their phones. The mood shifts from quiet observation to a mild, shared restlessness. The closing image of scattered orange and blue lights feels lonely but also faintly beautiful, as though the passengers have become part of the landscape they were watching.

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