Scottish beasts — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

tapping & tugging at the side of the tent early morning wind

around the headland from the seal sculpture this one moves

at the Osprey Center a crowd gathers to watch squirrels on the feeder

no does to herd the solitary stag haunts a caravan park

blood-red sunset I raise the midge net to take a nip

with each wingbeat another yelp oystercatcher

Phil Bennison Dry Stone Walling Mole Control

out of the water a black guillemot totters on its big red feet

rock pipit on the beach meadow pipit on the moor that same restless tail

these hill-walkers with their lurid greens & yellows! lizard, tiger beetle

on the far hill white boulders have infiltrated a herd of sheep

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Dave Bonta's "Scottish beasts" reads like a travel journal made of short snapshots. Each small scene catches an animal, or a person, in a moment of close attention. A tent flaps in the wind. A lone stag wanders a caravan park. Midges bite so hard that the speaker jokes about lifting the net "to take a nip." An oystercatcher yelps with every wingbeat, and a black guillemot totters on big red feet.

The speaker seems amused and curious, never solemn. Humour runs through the sequence: the crowd gathering for squirrels, the odd pair of jobs ("Dry Stone Walling / Mole Control") that suggests a noticeboard or leaflet, and the hill-walkers whose bright clothes are set beside a lizard and a tiger beetle. The last image, white boulders "infiltrating" a flock of sheep, makes a landscape feel playful and a little strange. The mood is relaxed and observant, with a pleasure in noticing small things.

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