Head cold — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The house is pinned under heavy snow. My head fills with mucus.

Icy limbs strain to reach the ground, alternately melting and freezing.

I drip in the noon-time glare. Let me be replenished in nightly increments.

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Dave Bonta's short poem links a heavy winter scene with the misery of a head cold. The first stanza sets the two side by side: the house is "pinned" under snow, and the speaker's head fills with mucus. Both feel weighed down and stuck, and the comparison makes the speaker's body seem like the house itself, buried and immobile.

The second stanza turns to the trees, or at least to "icy limbs" straining toward the ground as they melt and freeze again. That endless back-and-forth echoes the in-between state of being sick, never fully well, never fully worse. In the third stanza the speaker drips in the "noon-time glare," a neat image that works for both thawing ice and a runny nose. The last lines turn into a plea to be "replenished / in nightly increments," a wish for rest and slow recovery.

The mood is tired, a little wry, and quietly patient. There is discomfort here, but also a gentle humor in the way a small ailment gets matched with a whole snowy landscape.

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