Filmstrip — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

Clouds pull their shadows across the snow-filled valley as if dragging for a drowned swimmer.

I watch from the ridge, mesmerized by the alternation of gloom and glare.

The No Hunting sign rattles on the electric pole above the deep claw-marks of bears.

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A speaker stands on a ridge and watches cloud shadows move across a valley full of snow. The title, "Filmstrip," fits: the light flickers between "gloom and glare" like frames passing in a projector, and the speaker is held by it, almost hypnotized.

The most striking moment is the comparison in the first stanza. The shadows drag across the snow "as if dragging for a drowned swimmer," as though the valley were a lake being searched after a death. That image gives a calm, beautiful scene an undertone of loss and unease.

The last stanza brings in signs of human and animal presence. A "No Hunting" sign rattles in the wind, while below it are the "deep claw-marks of bears." The sign tries to impose rules, but the claw-marks suggest wilder forces that ignore them. The mood is quiet, eerie, and watchful: the speaker seems more awed than afraid, simply taking in a landscape that is both lovely and a little menacing.

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