Spruce grove — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

A brown-striped breast feather floats down from a high bough in the spruce grove

where some hawk or owl plucked a grouse. The outermost trees rock in the wind.

I step carefully as a bridegroom over each raised threshold of root.

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A single feather opens Dave Bonta's "Spruce grove," and it carries a surprising amount. It is "brown-striped," it comes from the breast, and it "floats down from a high bough," so slowly that the verb seems to hold it in the air. Only after the stanza break do we learn what it is the leftover of: "where some hawk or owl / plucked a grouse." The sentence has been delaying its violence. We watch something pretty drift down before we are told it is evidence of a kill.

The speaker never sees the killing. "Some hawk or owl" is a guess made from traces, and the casual "some" makes the predator anonymous and the event ordinary. The poem doesn't mourn the grouse or explain the hunt. It simply records what is left. Then comes a short, flat sentence: "The outermost / trees rock in the wind." The full stop falls in the middle of a line, so the rhythm pauses and lets the wind in. The word "outermost" also suggests that the grove has an edge and an inside. The trees at the boundary take the weather, and whatever lies behind them is more sheltered.

The form is plain. There are three unrhymed tercets in free verse, with short lines and no fixed meter. The poem depends on enjambment instead of rhyme to hold the reader's attention. Lines break on small hinges ("a high bough / in the spruce grove," "each raised / threshold of root"), so the eye keeps dropping to the next line much as the feather drops through the air. The sound is carefully handled too. "Brown-striped breast" packs its consonants tightly, which gives the feather a crisp, particular look. In the last stanza the rhythm slows. The longest line, "I step carefully as a bridegroom," is followed by two very short ones, and "raised / threshold of root" is awkward to say quickly because its stresses pile up. The reader is made to place each foot as deliberately as the speaker does.

That last stanza is also where the speaker finally appears. Until the word "I," the grove has been described as if no one were watching, and the poem's only figure of speech waits until then. Its simile, "carefully as a bridegroom," turns the woods into a kind of house. The outermost trees become walls, and the roots become thresholds. The roots of spruce often run close to the surface, so the image is probably a literal observation as well, since a walker really does have to step over them. The bridegroom suggests someone nervous, ceremonious and on his best behavior, entering a space that is not simply his own. "Carefully" works on two levels. It describes how to avoid tripping, and it describes an attitude of respect.

The poem also moves downward. It begins at a "high bough," passes through the swaying tops of the outer trees, and ends at the ground among the roots. This takes us from the predator's perch to the walker's feet, from the sky's business of killing to the human business of stepping. The poem never states a moral, but the arrangement implies one. A grouse has died here, and the forest does not become less lovely or less worthy of reverence because of it. The feather's slow fall and the bridegroom's slow walk belong to the same hushed attention.

This is what makes "Spruce grove" worth reading. In nine short lines it shows that a poem can handle death without drama and reverence without solemn language. The reader is trained to notice small evidence, such as a feather and a root, and to treat it as meaningful. The single simile does the emotional work. A wedding is a happy ritual, and it sits oddly beside a bird's death, yet the poem lets both stand in the same grove without explaining the connection. That gap is where the reader gets to think.

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