Lotic — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

A winter wren darts low over the rushing stream and unwinds its hurdy-gurdy song.

Not all water-lovers are bouyant in the same way. The waterthrush walks

on the bottom, tail bobbing as if spring-loaded. We stand dripping in the rain.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Two small birds share a stream, and the poem watches how differently each one lives with the water. The winter wren flies low over the current and sings a tangled, wheezing song, which the speaker compares to a hurdy-gurdy. The waterthrush does something stranger: it walks along the bottom, tail bobbing as if on a spring. The poem's one general statement, that "not all water-lovers / are bouyant in the same way," quietly tells us that loving a place can take many forms.

The ending shifts to "we," a pair or group standing "dripping in the rain." After the birds' ease and energy, the people seem a little soggy and plain, simply present and getting wet. The mood is gentle, curious, and humble. Judging by the title, "Lotic," a word for fast-moving water, the speaker is tuned in to the stream itself, and happy to stand in the weather and pay attention.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss