An inquiry concerning the poetics of, like, whatever — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The poem behind the poem says what do we do with the other creatures of this world? Those that stay put, stay put; those that move, raise their mobile devices to the window and press record. What do we do with the other languages of this world, the other ways to forget or fall silent? Dogs can’t be the only ones whose vocalizations have adapted to the inattentiveness of the human ear. And there’s a bird in New Guinea that can imitate with equal accuracy a camera shutter or a chainsaw. What do we do with ourselves during the 99% of our lives when we are not listening to the poem (song, prayer) in which our actual names happen to be recorded, and customs agents are demanding more and more documentation for everything that crosses a line, while those that stay put learn to imitate themselves… I’m sorry, what was the question again? I’ve been busy collecting photographs of cherubs. I love how they manage to be both fleshy and impossible. And now the voices are telling me to mind the gap— over and over, as if that were our most essential task…

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Dave Bonta's poem starts with a big, serious question: what do we do with the other creatures and languages of the world? Almost at once it shows how poorly we answer. People lift their phones to the window and press record, as if filming something were the same as paying attention. The animal details make the point sharper. Dogs may have changed their sounds because we listen so badly, and a bird that can mimic a camera shutter or a chainsaw has absorbed the noise we make.

Then the speaker slips. After wondering how we spend the 99% of life when we aren't listening, he breaks off, apologizes, and asks what the question was. He's been busy collecting photographs of cherubs. The joke is that he has done exactly what he was criticizing: wandered off into something pretty. The ending, with voices telling him to "mind the gap," feels both funny and uneasy. The mood is wry and self-mocking, with a quiet worry underneath about how easily we lose the thread.

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