Cornish haiku — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

where the dog threw up at the edge of the road early morning gulls

the incoming tide a ground beetle rotates on its back

through a gap in the hedge as we flash past a partridge and her chicks

village museum retired fishermen gaze at their old nets

rain in the campground a girl hops back to her tent on one foot

the sun comes out a tiny spider rappels from the brim of my hat

over there by the car park a band practices songs from World War I

in the still forest one limb is swaying boys on a rope swing

evening cottage the whippet’s thin hind leg glows orange in the sunset

listening to an owl pale magnolia blossoms as big as our faces

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Dave Bonta's sequence reads like a travel notebook made of snapshots. Each three-line haiku catches a brief scene: gulls where a dog was sick, a beetle stuck on its back as the tide comes in, a partridge and her chicks glimpsed from a passing car. The title suggests the setting is Cornwall, and the village museum, the fishing nets and the campground fit that picture, though the poems never explain themselves.

The speaker mostly watches and says little. There's no big statement, just a quiet pleasure in noticing: a girl hopping back to her tent on one foot, a spider lowering itself from a hat brim, a whippet's leg glowing orange in the evening light. Some moments are funny, some a little sad, like the retired fishermen looking at their old nets. The mood is relaxed, curious and gently affectionate. The final image, magnolia blossoms as big as "our faces," suggests the speaker is traveling with someone, and it ends the sequence on shared, peaceful wonder.

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