Purlieu — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

The art museum’s smallest room is filled with miniature landscapes. We stop in front of each, & my 8-year-old niece waits for me to hoist her up by the armpits for a five-second look.

I learn a new word from the exhibit’s title: purlieu. “A frequently visited place, an outlying district,” says Merriam-Webster’s New Collegiate. In the plural, “Confines, bounds” as well as “Neighborhood, environs.” From the French, “to go through,” it came into use in the Middle Ages, when it had a fairly specific denotation: “ME purlewe land severed from an English royal forest by perambulation.”

Later, she watches from the back seat of the car as a ten-dollar bill change hands. Giggles. “They hold the money as if it were fragile!” she whispers in my ear.

Eva and I go for a ramble in the new snow, me with the big plastic saucer under my arm. She discovers tracking: “If you follow an animal’s tracks, you can tell where it went!” But the squirrels elude pursuit on the ground for longer than the distance between two trees. Then it’s time to re-examine our own tracks. Walking forward, craning around to see what we would see if we were tracking ourselves. We’re detectives now, she decides.

She follows tracks to where they disappear in a hole or under a log, wants to begin excavating on the spot. I remember this fascination with burrows going back to when she was four, if not earlier. “What lives here?” was one of her first intelligible questions. Now more and more this question comes accompanied by a wish: to live there too. At any given charismatic opening in the woods: “This would be a great place for a kind of a house. Well, not with walls or anything. Just to sleep in. This summer we could camp here. We can bring blankets and make tea.”

We follow a deer trail through the woods, pause to inspect weasel and mouse trails. “How far is the spruce grove?” “We’re not heading for the spruce grove. In fact, we’re going in the opposite direction.” “Are we ever going to find these deer?” “Probably not. These prints were made before last night’s additional snow.”

So it seems animal tracks can’t be trusted to take you where you want to go. The chief detective looks for something else to investigate. Thirsty, makes a discovery: the snow right here doesn’t quite taste quite the same as the snow over there. Or so she says. We thread though the laurel to the woods road and make our way to the top of the field, stopping every ten feet to sample the snow.

“Can’t you taste the difference?” “Um, no. See, you lose your sense of taste when you grow up. That’s one of the great things about being a kid.” “This one tastes like cotton candy!” “I’ve never had cotton candy. What does it taste like?” “I don’t know. I’ve never had it either.”

At the edge of the field, a new wish: to walk without leaving any footprints. “What if you just ran really, really fast?” She tries it: no luck. I reason with her. “You saw all the squirrel tracks. Squirrels weigh less than a pound! Think about it – even the mice leave tracks. The only things that don’t are the ones with wings.”

At last, the spruce grove at the top of the field: the ultimate outdoor living room. Destination of countless picnic excursions with her Nanna. With me she plays tour guide, gets exasperated at my evident familiarity with the spot. Our footprints cross paths with a pair of turkey tracks, a lone coyote. We cut back into the field just soon enough to avoid the deer carcass, which neither of us mentions. “I love the view from up here,” she says. Ridge after ridge stretching away to the east.

Time to put the saucer to use. We go to the edge of the steepest hill and my heart sinks. I grew up with sleds you could steer; with the saucer, gravity has almost the only say over where you end up. But determined to cut a good trail I sit down in the thing and lie back, trusting in my outstretched legs to keep me pointed downhill. Bump bump bump, a half-turn and I’m at the bottom looking up. I shout something cheerful, trying hard to keep the shakiness out of my voice. On the brow of the hill a small red figure jumps up and down with glee.

I would’ve been terrified at her age, but I don’t tell her that. “Now hold on tight and be careful!” “Give me a push!” A quarter of my weight, she goes airborne at each bump. At the second one her hat flies off. Spinning around, going backwards or forwards, it’s one continuous shriek all the way down. Then here she comes charging back up the hill, half-unbuttoned coat flapping, stopping to examine the places where the saucer left the ground. “Did you see me flying?”

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A poem about a snowy afternoon with a child begins in a museum and stops to quote a dictionary. That detour is the key to the whole piece. The speaker learns the word "purlieu" from an exhibit title and looks it up. The entry gives him a cluster of meanings: a frequently visited place, an outlying district, "confines, bounds," "neighborhood, environs." Its medieval sense is land "severed from an English royal forest by perambulation," meaning land marked off by walking its edges. Everything after that is a perambulation. The speaker and his niece Eva walk a patch of ground that is half familiar and half wild, and the poem tries to work out who owns it, who sees it best, and what a walk through it leaves behind.

The opening shows how the poem is built. It starts in short, carefully broken lines, with Eva hoisted up "by the armpits / for a five-second look" at tiny landscapes. Then the dictionary entry arrives, and after that the poem relaxes into long paragraphs of prose. There is no rhyme and no steady meter. The rhythm comes from speech, especially the quick back-and-forth of the dialogue: "Are we ever going to find these deer?" "Probably not." The form copies the walk itself, beginning with a view framed on a wall and ending in open ground where nobody lifts anyone up to see.

The imagery of tracks carries most of the poem's thought. Eva discovers that "if you follow an animal's tracks, you can tell where it went," and the two become "detectives." But the speaker has to admit that tracks made before the night's fresh snow lead nowhere useful, so "animal tracks can't be trusted to take you where you want to go." This reads like a small joke, but it also hints at something larger about following any trail, including a child's attention, which keeps veering off to a new discovery. Eva's wish "to walk without leaving any footprints" adds to this. Her uncle's reply is a lesson in physics: "The only things that don't are the ones with wings."

That line pays off at the end. Sledding down the hill, Eva "goes airborne at each bump" and then examines "the places where the saucer left the ground." Her closing question, "Did you see me flying?", answers the wish for a trackless walk. Flight is the one place the child finds where she leaves no trace. The scene also reverses the opening. In the museum the adult lifts the child to see a world in miniature. On the hill the speaker is at the bottom "looking up" at "a small red figure" jumping with glee, so the child is now the one who is high up and seeing farther.

The adult's role is subtler than that of a guide. He has a quiet, protective discretion. He says nothing about the deer carcass ("which neither of us mentions") and hides his fear on the sled: "I would've been terrified at her age, but I don't tell her that." Death and fear both sit at the edges of this ground, and the two walkers silently agree to keep them there. Meanwhile Eva's perceptions are sharper than his. She notices that adults hold money "as if it were fragile," and she claims the snow tastes different from place to place. When he says adults lose their sense of taste, he is half teasing and half sincere. Her cotton-candy snow is funnier still: she has never tasted cotton candy, yet she still insists on the comparison. Imagination here works without any experience behind it.

The poem matters because it takes the fussy, scholarly word "purlieu" and shows what it feels like in practice. A purlieu is a place you keep returning to, and its edges are made by walking them. For Eva the woods are a place to live in, with blankets and tea and "a kind of a house. Well, not with walls." The poem never states its idea outright. It leaves it in the image of a trail of footprints, a few of them stopping where the ground ends and the flying begins.

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