Travel Anxiety — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

If travel were just the open road, I might take to it. Not this labored labyrinth, this intestinal clench of visas tickets security screenings long lines wrong seats bad restrooms too much luggage no-fly lists takeoff turbulence recirculated air cramped legroom boredom soreness limbo purgatory sleepless wondering will they let us in turn us back demand proof of our identity confiscate our umbilical cords make us wait wait wait wait, wherever we are bound.

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The speaker begins with a small confession: the open road itself would be fine. What spoils travel is everything built around it. The poem calls it a "labored labyrinth" and an "intestinal clench," so the anxiety is felt in the body as much as the mind.

The long middle passage is the heart of it. Visas, tickets, screenings, bad restrooms, turbulence, and sleeplessness pour out with no punctuation, so the reader is made to feel the pile-up and the breathlessness. Worries shift from petty (legroom) to serious (no-fly lists, proving who you are). The speaker also slips into "we" and "us," which suggests a shared, ordinary dread rather than a private quirk.

The tone is tense and weary, with a little dark humor in "confiscate our umbilical cords." The repeated "wait wait wait wait" drags the pace. The last line, "wherever we are bound," lands flatly: the stress follows us no matter the destination.

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