The Hollow (2) — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

train horn

the forest pool’s murky surface stippled with bubbles

mosquitoes rising only as high as my knees

still drying their wings

West Nile virus

missing the heart-stopping flush of a grouse

old charcoal hearth

the last butternut tree’s mossy corpse

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A walker moves through a forest, noting small details as they appear, and the poem is built from those fragments. A distant train horn, a murky pool dotted with bubbles, mosquitoes drifting up around the knees. Each image sits alone, with space around it, much like the pauses of a slow walk.

Beneath the quiet observation there is a sense of loss. The mention of West Nile virus turns the mosquitoes from a minor nuisance into something faintly threatening. The speaker misses the sudden burst of a grouse flushing from cover, which the poem suggests is no longer so common here. The old charcoal hearth points to past human work, and the last butternut tree is already a mossy corpse.

The speaker never states a feeling outright. The mood is quiet and elegiac, a calm kind of grief, as if the speaker is noticing, one detail at a time, how much of this place has faded.

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