The Hollow (4) — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

in the purple-stemmed jungle of pokeweed last year’s skeletons

goldenrod meadow

forty acres and a wren

the somewhere else that is also here

ridge after ridge

too big to hide the spider draws in her legs and turns to gemstone

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Dave Bonta's poem reads like a series of quick glimpses from someone walking through a wooded valley, noticing one thing at a time. We see tall pokeweed with its purple stems, the dried remains of last year's plants, a meadow of goldenrod, and a single wren. The short, separate lines feel like pauses in a walk, where the speaker stops, looks, and moves on.

The mood is quiet and attentive, with a sense of wonder underneath. "Forty acres and a wren" suggests how much space there is compared with how small the living things in it are. The line "the somewhere else that is also here" hints that this ordinary place feels like another world to the speaker. In the last lines, a spider pulls in her legs and "turns to gemstone." Judging by the imagery, she looks tiny and still, and she becomes beautiful and precious. The poem seems to say that careful looking can make a small, overlooked thing shine.

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