The Hollow (6) — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

they must love the milk that makes them so bad-tasting

milkweed bugs

memorial bench

all the young trees it shelters now

the fog still lingers in a funnel spider’s web

deertongue grass

the “creep” in “creeper”

battened to a locust trunk by a thousand tentacles

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Dave Bonta strings together quick glimpses of a woodland place, each one caught in a few plain words. Milkweed bugs are bad-tasting, and the speaker wryly guesses it comes from the milk they feed on. A memorial bench now shelters young trees, which reverses what we expect: the bench was meant to give rest to people, but here it seems to protect new growth. Fog hangs in a funnel spider's web, and the last image shows something clinging to a locust trunk with "a thousand tentacles."

The speaker mostly watches and doesn't comment, but the curiosity is clear. There's a playful moment in noticing the "creep" inside "creeper," where the speaker pauses over a word the way they pause over a bug. The mood is quiet, attentive and a little humorous, with a gentle thread of death and renewal running underneath. The poem suggests that paying close attention to small, odd details is its own kind of reward.

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