The Hollow (31) — Summary

looking for beechdrops’ nondescript stalks

the road down dips up

hollow or holler? just ’round the bend the stream falls away

deepening ravine

trees stretched thin to reach the sky

musclewood

I was that skinny once

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The speaker is out on a walk, searching for beechdrops, a plant with plain, easily overlooked stalks. The poem moves the way a walker does: the road dips, the stream drops away, and the ground opens into a deepening ravine. Small details sit in their own lines, so we seem to notice them one at a time, with the speaker. Even the quibble over "hollow or holler?" feels like a bit of idle thought that comes while walking.

Then the eye turns upward to trees stretched thin as they reach for the sky. The musclewood, a tree whose name suggests strength, stands on its own line like a pause. The last line, "I was that skinny once," is a sudden, wry personal note. The speaker sees a younger self in the slender trunks. The mood is quiet, attentive and gently humorous, with a small touch of nostalgia for a body and a time that have changed.

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