The Hollow (37) — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

among straight ascenders an ancient grapevine’s grave accent

the last white asters

the woods are darkest just before the fall

weak sunlight

witch hazel beginning to extrude its rays

so green you’d think it’s still spring

Christmas fern

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Dave Bonta's "The Hollow (37)" takes a walk through late-autumn woods and treats the forest like a page of writing. Its seven small stanzas read like glimpses, each one something the eye lands on before moving to the next. The number in the title suggests this is one entry in a longer run of nature poems, but the poem stands perfectly well alone. Its subject is the awkward in-between time of year, when summer has gone and winter hasn't arrived, and its central idea is that this turning is not a clean break. Endings and beginnings overlap.

The opening stanza sets up the poem's best trick. "Among straight ascenders / an ancient grapevine's / grave accent." An ascender is the upward stroke of a letter like *b* or *l*, so the tall straight trunks become strokes of type. The vine, hanging slantwise between them, becomes a grave accent, the small slanted mark written above a letter. The pun on "grave" adds a note of seriousness, even mourning, to the image. The poem never explains the metaphor. It simply lets the woods be a line of print, which invites us to slow down and read the landscape carefully.

The sound of the poem supports this. "Ascenders," "accent" and "asters" form a chain of similar sounds across the first two stanzas, so the language seems to grow out of the scene. There is no rhyme and almost no punctuation. The only capital letter in the whole poem belongs to "Christmas." Without full stops, the stanzas drift into one another like steps along a path. The shape varies too: a three-line stanza, then single lines, then pairs. The one-line stanzas ("the last white asters," "weak sunlight," "Christmas fern") work like pauses, moments when the walker stops and looks.

The middle of the poem contains its cleverest turn: "the woods are darkest / just before the fall." Anyone who knows the saying "it's always darkest before the dawn" will hear it behind this line. Bonta swaps *dawn* for *fall*, and the word then does two jobs, meaning both the season and the dropping of leaves. The thought is also physically accurate, since woods are darkest when the canopy is still thick, just before the leaves come down and let the light in. A line of comfort about hope becomes a quiet observation about trees. What follows is "weak sunlight," a brief image that shows how little light gets through.

Then comes the surprise of the season. "Witch hazel beginning / to extrude its rays" is a bright note in a dim scene, and it is also true to nature, because witch hazel is a plant that flowers late in the year. The word "extrude" is a good choice. It sounds mechanical, like something squeezed out of a nozzle, and it suggests the thin, stringy petals pushing out slowly. The flower's "rays" also answer the weak sunlight of the previous stanza: where the sky gives little, the plant makes its own small suns. Right beside "the last white asters," it is a flower ending and a flower beginning in the same few lines.

The final two stanzas shift to a more conversational voice. "So green you'd think / it's still spring" sounds like someone speaking aloud to a companion, and it admits how easily the eye is fooled. The poem then ends on "Christmas fern," a bare noun phrase with no verb. A fern named for winter is an evergreen, so it carries spring's colour into the coldest months. Its name also points toward the end of the year. The poem stops without telling us what to feel, which suits its patient, observing mood.

What makes the poem significant is how much it does in so few words. It never announces a theme about change or time. It lets a pun on typography, a twisted proverb and a handful of plants carry the idea. For students, it shows how a poem can be tiny and still layered, and how close attention to ordinary things can feel like reading. After the poem, a walk in the woods might look a little like a page.

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