The Hollow (43) — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

200 years old or ten thousand

former road/streambed

rhododendron trunk

bare as high as a starving deer’s neck can stretch

elevation measured by the number of unripe spikenard berries

slow-creeping slope

all the tree boles curved to keep their balance

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Dave Bonta's "The Hollow (43)" reads like a set of notes taken while walking through a wooded valley. The speaker looks closely at the ground and trees and lets small details tell the story. The opening lines admit that the place could be "200 years old / or ten thousand," so its age can't really be known. It was once a road or a streambed, and the poem leaves that uncertainty hanging.

The images that follow are quietly vivid. A rhododendron is stripped bare as high as a hungry deer can reach, which suggests the animals' hunger without stating it. Height is measured not in feet but by how many unripe spikenard berries you find, a playful, intimate way of knowing a place. The poem ends with trees whose trunks curve "to keep their balance" on a slowly sliding slope.

The mood is calm, attentive, and a little humbled. The speaker seems less interested in explaining the hollow than in noticing how everything in it adapts to time, hunger, and gravity.

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