The Hollow (47) — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

railroad crossing

all the train horns I hear in my sleep

in the unloved woods between train tracks and river needles and condoms

a shirt abandoned by the fire ring

homeless campsite

floodplain

mosquitoes turning blood into whine

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The poem moves like a slow walk through a neglected strip of land between railroad tracks and a river. It starts with sound: train horns so familiar that the speaker hears them even while asleep. That detail suggests someone who lives close to this place and can't shake it, even in dreams.

The scenes that follow are bare and unsentimental. Needles, condoms, a shirt left by a fire ring, a homeless campsite. Nobody appears, only what people have left behind. Calling the woods "unloved" is the poem's one openly judgmental note, and it carries a quiet sadness, as if the place has been forgotten by everyone but the speaker. The word "floodplain" sits alone, hinting that the land is vulnerable and temporary.

The last image, mosquitoes turning blood into whine, is oddly sharp. It's grim and almost funny, and it makes the place feel hot, buzzing, and alive. The mood is observant and uneasy, more watchful than angry.

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