Sea Levels — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

low tide we comb the ancient peat for footprints

drowned forest the gull’s cry turns eldritch

undead stumps 4000 years later sprout bladderwrack

our shared excitement at scraps of root-bark

seaside town all the colors of ice cream against the Atlantic

the high street is already lower than the beach

Tisha B’Av just past Orthodox Jewish families stroll the sea wall

land marks us sea levels us

beneath the waves we are saying hello and goodbye

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Walkers on a beach at low tide search the exposed peat for traces of a forest that the sea swallowed long ago. The ancient stumps are now home to bladderwrack, so land and sea seem to have swapped places. The speaker and their companion share a small, childlike thrill at finding scraps of root-bark, and that simple excitement sits beside something more unsettling, like the gull's cry turning "eldritch."

The seaside town adds a modern layer. Its ice-cream colors look cheerful against the Atlantic, yet the high street is "already lower than the beach," a quiet warning about rising water. The mention of Tisha B'Av, with families strolling the sea wall, suggests a day of mourning set against an ordinary holiday scene. The mood is curious and tender, with dread underneath. The closing lines, "land marks us / sea levels us," treat time and water as things that shape and equalize everyone, and the final "hello and goodbye" holds arrival and loss together.

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