Putting a Garden In — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Putting a garden in so often entails putting wildlife out. You develop an adversarial relationship with nature, fencing, trapping, shooting, poisoning, getting a guard dog… It’s this sad reality that many years ago turned me against what had been the reigning passion of my youth.

onion bed pulling out wild onions

But my wife suggested from her bunker in London that as long as I am stuck in Pennsylvania for at least half the summer due to the pandemic, I might as well grow some vegetables. Great idea, I said, already relishing the thought of getting my fingers in the dirt again. But just planting fence posts, I displaced three adorable baby bunnies from the long grass, and when our neighbor plowed the site up, a meadow vole rushed out, all fur and panic.

wire fence the wind’s new whistle

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Dave Bonta's piece mixes prose and short haiku-like verses to show a small moral problem: growing food often means displacing the animals already living there. The speaker admits that this uncomfortable truth once turned him away from gardening, a passion of his youth. Then the pandemic keeps him stuck in Pennsylvania, and his wife, writing from London, suggests he plant vegetables. He agrees happily, eager to get his hands in the soil.

But the good mood gets complicated. Setting fence posts disturbs baby bunnies, and the neighbor's plowing sends a vole running, "all fur and panic." The two haiku echo this tension. In the first, pulling out wild onions in an onion bed hints at how even cultivation involves removing something wild. In the second, the wind whistling through the new fence suggests a boundary has been built. The mood is gentle and wry, but touched with guilt, as the speaker's pleasure meets the plain cost of making a garden.

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