Out of Whack — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

It’s not every year we get snow in dogwood season. This particular year, the wild weather simply adds to the impression that the world is completely out of whack.

spiderweb catching snowflakes their little spikes

Marooned in our homes, tempers fray. We wonder how long this will go on, worry about finances and food shortages. I watch a pair of scarlet tanagers—treetop birds—reduced to feeding near the ground and foraging for invertebrates in the creek.

redder than our open mouths tanager

But spring is always a puzzle: the innumerable ways that spikiness blossoms and leaves us.

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Dave Bonta mixes short prose with two tiny haiku-like moments to capture a strange, unsettled spring. Snow has arrived when the dogwoods should be blooming, and the speaker says the whole world feels "out of whack." People are stuck at home, tempers are fraying, and there's worry about money and food. The weather seems to echo that general unease.

The small images do a lot of the work. A spiderweb catches snowflakes, and the word "spikes" links delicate frost to something sharp. Then the scarlet tanagers, normally high in the trees, are forced down near the creek to hunt for food. The comparison to "our open mouths" suggests hunger and need, maybe even a cry of distress, in a flash of red against the white.

The closing line shifts the mood. Spring is called "a puzzle," and spikiness, whether in weather, tempers, or buds, both blossoms and leaves us. The ending feels uneasy but quietly accepting: hard times come and go.

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