Descent — Summary

katydids in and out of sync our ragged breaths

In dreams, my hometown in central Pennsylvania has partially merged with London. There are multiple high-rise apartment buildings now, rather than just one, the river is wider, the paper mill has become a sprawling industrial complex, and the poor section of town now has a distinctly bohemian flavor. Wandering the wooded hill in the center of town, I find a nearly deserted, glassed-in staircase, and descend it in great leaps, nearly flying. My British wife, undercover as a Bond girl, asks how I can do that and not get hurt. This is all just a dream, I tell her. Is it real for you?

katydids together apart together

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Two short haiku-like frames hold a dream told in plain prose. The katydids bookend it: their calls drift in and out of sync, and the speaker compares that to "our ragged breaths," which suggests two people lying awake together in the night. The closing version shifts to "together apart / together," as if the sync has finally been found, or at least accepted.

The dream in the middle is part familiar, part strange. The speaker's hometown has blended with London, grown bigger and more bohemian, and he leaps down a glass staircase, nearly flying. His wife, playing a Bond girl, asks how he can do it without getting hurt. His answer, "This is all just a dream," turns into a question: "Is it real for you?"

That last line carries the poem's feeling. It is tender and a little wondering, reaching across the gap between one person's inner world and another's. The mood is quiet, intimate, and dreamlike, with closeness and separateness sitting side by side.

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