In Common — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

What does it mean to be average? When a computer averages the features from hundreds of faces, the resulting image will look like a supermodel. This tells us that what is average is not necessarily common, and vice versa.

But I love the idea of this perfect face held in common, each of us contributing our own small part to it. Together we are conventionally beautiful. As individuals we can be uncommonly beautiful.

first day of fall a harrow’s yellow teeth

It’s the autumn equinox, one of two days a year with perfectly average durations of day and night. I look west to see the sunrise reddening the ridge till it’s as flushed as the face of my British wife after one drink. My uncommonly beautiful lover, whom I see now only by web conferencing software. The soft wear of her. The solid-state drive of her.

And of course our dilemma is as common as COVID. The law of averages may be on our side as individuals, but who wants to take a chance on being average? The only way out is if we each contribute our piecemeal vulnerability to the common good.

marsh hawk the draft horses with their blinders on

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Opening with a question about what "average" really means, the speaker notes that a computer-blended face looks like a supermodel, so average and common aren't the same thing. He likes the idea of a shared, perfect face that each of us helps build, while still being uncommonly beautiful on our own.

Short haiku-like moments punctuate the prose. On the first day of fall, the speaker watches the sunrise redden a ridge and thinks of his wife's flushed face after a drink. The poem suggests they are apart, since he sees her only through video software, and the longing shows in the tender, oddly technological line "the solid-state drive of her." The loneliness is tied to a wider, shared situation, which the poem calls "as common as COVID." The ending argues that the way through is to share our vulnerability for the common good. The closing image of draft horses with blinders on is ambiguous, but it may hint at how hard it is to see beyond ourselves. The mood is quiet, wistful, and gently hopeful.

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