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Dave BontaInspired

I was flying in an aircraft of bones not the pilot not the ball-turret gunner I was flying in an aircraft as if in my own bones my aluminium hide

the captain’s intercom voice goes all through me and the flight attendant’s safety instructions her boredom buzzes against my rivets like a trapped wasp

but I rise hungry to exceed myself I dip a wing and turn out from the lit grids of suburbs with their unlikely multitude of shadows which must be trees

and down there somewhere my very ancient-most ancestor a tree rat all insectivorous sinew answers my roar with its own a long high note straight out of Cassiopeia

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The speaker imagines being the aircraft itself rather than a passenger or crew member. The plane's metal skin becomes "my aluminium hide," and its frame becomes "my own bones." The pilot's voice on the intercom travels right through this body, and a flight attendant's boredom buzzes against the rivets like a trapped wasp. It's a funny, slightly uncomfortable image of being a machine that feels everything said inside it.

Then the mood lifts. The plane "rises hungry to exceed myself," banking away from the grids of suburban lights, where trees can only be guessed at as shadows. Far below, the speaker pictures a distant ancestor, a small tree-dwelling creature, answering the engine's roar with its own cry. That sound seems to come from the stars, from Cassiopeia. The poem moves from mechanical routine to a sense of wonder, linking human flight with the deep animal past. The tone is playful at first, then awestruck.

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