Catching a Cranefly: linked verses — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

just one drink catching a cranefly in mid-air

how many months now since I’ve held someone

missing you the morning after a hard frost

breath measured out in small white clouds

buzzing what the rattlesnake sees in infrared

ah just to touch that velvety skin

floating leaves the fetal curl that makes a good craft

trapped in transit with whatever’s going ’round

migrants a Japanese barberry trembling with sparrows

will the circle in fact be unbroken

mountain path I step aside to let a caterpillar pass

in the trail register box an empty bottle

just one drink…

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Told through a chain of short linked verses, the poem follows a lonely speaker on a walk through the outdoors, with thoughts drifting between the landscape and private longing. The opening line, "just one drink," hints at temptation, and the closing return to it makes the poem loop back on itself. In between, the speaker asks how many months it has been since they held someone, and says they are missing a person on a frost-cold morning, watching their breath turn to small white clouds.

Nature keeps answering that ache. A cranefly, a rattlesnake, sparrows in a barberry bush, and a caterpillar all appear, each fragile or fleeting in its own way. The speaker steps aside for the caterpillar, a small act of gentleness. Near the end, an empty bottle in the trail register box suggests that drinking may be part of the loneliness. The mood is quiet, tender and a little sad, and the circular ending leaves the speaker's struggle unresolved.

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