Song Dogs — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

Three days before the 2020 U.S. presidential election, my friend L. and I get lost on a hike above a dammed-up river, too busy arguing about politics to notice that we’ve branched off onto the wrong logging road. The sun is going down. On the ridge above us, coyotes start singing. Their melismatic solos intertwine in a way that can’t be called dissonant, though Lord knows it’s nothing as simple as harmony.

no longer lost that hole in the clouds far upslope

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Two friends are so absorbed in a quarrel that they walk straight past their turning. That small mishap is the whole event of Dave Bonta's «Song Dogs», and it carries more than it first appears to. The speaker and "L." are hiking above a river, "too busy arguing about politics to notice" that they have taken the wrong logging road. Then coyotes start to sing on the ridge, and the evening changes. The poem's central idea is that being lost and being found are not settled by who wins an argument. Direction can come from paying attention to something larger than the quarrel, and voices can share a space without agreeing.

The poem is set in time as carefully as in place: "Three days before the 2020 U.S. presidential election." The date explains the argument, but the poem never says what either friend believes. It cares about the manner of the quarrel, not its content. Small details do quiet work. The river is "dammed-up," held back and unable to run, which may hint at conversations that have stopped moving, though that reading is an inference. "The sun is going down" is a flat, short sentence, and after the long opening it lands like a sudden awareness of time and danger. The tone is conversational and a little rueful. "Lord knows" is spoken language, a shrug that lets the speaker admit a mild defeat.

The central image is the coyotes' sound, and the poem handles it with a musician's vocabulary. "Melismatic" describes a single syllable stretched over many notes, and the word itself is drawn out and winding. The coyotes sing "solos" that "intertwine," so each voice keeps its own line while weaving through the others. The sentence then does something clever with negatives: the sound "can't be called dissonant," yet it is "nothing as simple as harmony." Neither word fits. The poem is reaching for a third state, in which separate voices overlap without clashing and without blending. Set beside the friends' political argument, this is a gentle rebuke and also a model. The title helps, since "Song Dogs" is a nickname for coyotes, and the poem itself never says "dog" or "howl." It chooses "singing," and so grants the animals dignity as musicians.

Structurally, the poem is a prose paragraph followed by a short three-line verse, a pairing that resembles the haibun tradition. There is no rhyme and no regular meter in the prose, which moves at the pace of talk. Its sentences lengthen as the music arrives, so the syntax seems to wind like the coyotes' voices. The verse then compresses everything:

*no longer lost*

*that hole in the clouds*

*far upslope*

The lines are loose in length (roughly four, five and three syllables), without capitals or punctuation. That missing punctuation leaves a pleasing ambiguity. "No longer lost" can describe the friends, who have found their way. It can also attach to "that hole in the clouds," an opening in the sky that is now noticed and located. Both readings can hold at once. Clouds appear only here, and the shift from hearing to seeing matters. After the ear has been drawn upward to the ridge, the eye follows and finds a gap of light "far upslope." The poem does not say how the friends find the right road, and it makes no claim that the coyotes guided them. It only sets the two events side by side, which is more truthful and more suggestive.

The poem is significant for what it declines to do. A date three days before an election could have produced a political poem. Instead it gives a small, modest scene in which the quarrel is quietly outgrown. Nothing is resolved between the friends, and no one is proved right. What changes is their attention. In under a hundred words, the poem suggests that disagreement need not be settled to be survived, and that paying attention to the world beyond the argument may be what shows us the way.

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