Presence — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

A tree seems like the very embodiment of presence, but this time of year it is mostly absent, at least aboveground. It’s real in the same way that a life-size cardboard cutout of a politician is real. You can project anything onto it. It’s another blank space on your mental map.

sleeping it off on a park bench fallen leaves

In her poem “Come Into Animal Presence,” Denise Levertov celebrated the rare privilege of being ignored by wild animals. Lately I’ve experienced this to an unusual degree: with a doe that barely stepped aside for me, a beaver that went about its business fifty feet away, flocks of turkeys that walk right past, and small creatures foraging all around me in the night woods. I’m not sure what I’ve done to deserve it, but I’m humbled and grateful to be allowed to fade into the woodwork.

hole between the stars flying squirrel

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Dave Bonta pairs short prose reflections with two haiku, and the whole piece circles one idea: what it means to be present, and how that can mean being unnoticed. In the first section, a winter tree seems to lose its presence. With its leaves gone, it becomes something like a cardboard cutout, a blank surface where we project our own thoughts. The haiku about leaves lying on a park bench gives this a gentle, slightly funny image, as if the season itself were sleeping off a long night.

The second section turns warmer. The speaker mentions Denise Levertov's poem about animals ignoring a human, then describes real encounters: a doe, a beaver, turkeys, small creatures at night. Here, being unnoticed feels like a gift, and the speaker sounds humbled and grateful. The closing haiku, with a flying squirrel as a "hole between the stars," is quiet and strange. The mood is hushed, curious, and content, with presence found in fading into the background.

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