Heard on High — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

In the news: a last-minute Brexit deal, a Covid stimulus bill passing through Congress, and possible signs of intelligent life from Proxima Centauri. Sitting outside around midnight, I watch a deer silhouetted against the snow pick her way to the stream, hooves crunching through the icy snowpack. And the lacework of tree branches: a threadbare garment. It’s one thing to feel as if we’re all connected in some cosmic web, but it’s another matter entirely to share the bleak familiarity of our solitude with strangers, I mutter to myself. Her head goes up, ears pivoting like radio telescopes in my direction.

power outage all the glowing lights in the sky

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A man sits outside at midnight, thinking about the headlines: a Brexit deal, a stimulus bill, and maybe even a signal from another star. Against all that big, noisy news, the scene in front of him is small and quiet. A deer crosses the snow to a stream, and the bare branches look like a worn-out piece of clothing.

The speaker muses that feeling connected to everything is easy enough, but sharing our loneliness with strangers is harder. He says this out loud, half to himself, and the deer lifts her head, her ears turning toward him like radio telescopes. That comparison is clever: the animal becomes the one listening for signs of life, just like the scientists in the news.

The closing haiku shifts the mood. In a power outage, the stars become the only lights. The tone is hushed, wondering, and gently lonely, yet it finds a kind of company in being overheard by a wild creature.

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