Walking Blues — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

woke up this morning with my shoes gaping at me like open graves

the tapping of rain on the roof made a rhythm I could almost feel

this isn’t walking weather and my feet need to move

restless for no good reason that bivalve in my chest keeps opening

a mussel gluing down its good foot so it can rock in the current

I want to go where the river goes to the sky or its best mirrors

which have the blues too in at least three different ways

all of which call to me in the melisma of a mirage

I want the horizon to stop receding I want forests to reclaim the fields

I want a woman whose eyes are as dark as the earth

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Bonta's speaker wakes on a rainy day with an urge to move that the weather won't allow. His shoes look like open graves, and the rain on the roof sets up a rhythm he can almost feel in his body. The restlessness has no clear cause, and he knows it.

The central image is the mussel in his chest, a shellfish that opens and grips the riverbed with its foot so it can sway in the current. He is both anchored and longing to flow. From there his wishes widen: to follow the river toward the sky, to have the horizon stop retreating, to see forests take back the fields, and to find a woman whose eyes are dark as earth.

The mood is wistful and a little weary, like the blues in the title. Underneath it runs a desire to leave human clutter behind and belong to something older and more natural.

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