Grievance Machine — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

let me brand myself he-who-is-different

let me howl around in lieu of feedback

then unwind in a hot bath of outrage

feed the twist in my gut that feels like hunger

we discriminating consumers who like what we like

we must be sure to bark up all the right trees

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The most telling words in "Grievance Machine" are the two it starts with: *let me*. The speaker isn't seized by anger or backed into a corner. He asks permission to be angry, the way you might ask for a second helping. That small politeness sets up the poem's joke. Dave Bonta gives us someone who treats outrage as a pleasure to be scheduled, then widens the lens until the lone complainer turns out to be one of a crowd.

The first couplet is a piece of self-mockery. To "brand myself / he-who-is-different" borrows the language of marketing, so even individuality arrives as a product. The hyphens make it worse. They weld a whole identity into a single solemn name, like a title in a myth, and the grandeur is faintly ridiculous. "Brand" also carries an older, rougher meaning, the mark burned into livestock, which hints that the speaker is being owned even as he claims to stand apart.

The next images pile up comic contradictions. He wants to "howl around / in lieu of feedback." Feedback is a response, something you receive and might learn from, but it is also the shrieking loop a microphone makes when it hears itself. The speaker prefers pure noise to either meaning. Then he will "unwind / in a hot bath of outrage." The verb sounds mechanical, like a spring slackening, which fits the title's machine. The bath is warm, private and soothing. Outrage here is a comfort, a spa treatment, not a burden. Anger is usually pictured as burning or boiling, and Bonta makes it cosy.

The fourth couplet darkens the tone. "Feed the twist in my gut / that feels like hunger" is the most psychologically sharp moment. The word "feels" matters: the knot in the stomach only *resembles* hunger. The poem suggests the speaker is feeding the wrong appetite, and the grievance he indulges may stand in for something unnamed, such as attention or belonging. Judging by the imagery, the machine runs on a need it can never satisfy, which is why it must keep running.

Then the pronoun changes. After four "I" and "me" couplets, "we" arrives: "we discriminating consumers / who like what we like." "Discriminating" works two ways. It flatters us as people of taste, and it also hints at prejudice. "Like what we like" is a closed circle, a sentence that explains nothing and simply repeats itself. "Like" also has a modern, online ring, so the line suggests an audience trading approval back and forth. The self-proclaimed outsider has quietly joined a group.

The final image completes that turn. The idiom "barking up the wrong tree" means chasing the wrong target, and Bonta flips it: "we must be sure to bark up / all the right trees." The line break after "up" holds the familiar phrase in suspense before the twist lands. The animal imagery also tells a small story. The speaker began by *howling*, a wolf's wild and solitary sound, and ends by *barking*, which belongs to a domestic dog that knows what is expected of it. Even "right" is double-edged, meaning both correct targets and approved ones. Rebellion has become obedience, with the pack choosing which trees deserve the noise.

The form quietly supports this. There is no rhyme, no punctuation and no capital letters, so the poem looks as casual and unedited as a posted rant. Yet it is built from six tidy couplets with very short lines, which gives it the neatness of a system. The b-sounds of "brand," "bath" and "bark" tie the beginning to the end, while the plain, almost flat diction never raises its voice. The poem satirizes shouting by staying quiet.

What makes it significant is that the satire isn't safely aimed elsewhere. It starts with "me" and only later says "we," so the reader can't enjoy the mockery from a distance. Anyone who has joined in a pile-on, or felt the pull of a satisfying fury, will recognize the speaker. In twelve short lines it asks whether our strongest opinions are really ours, or just the sounds we have been trained to make.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Painted Trillium

Trillium undulatum Painted lady, late riser, you rush out of the ground, get pollinated on the fly
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Initiation

Let him continue in the ground, he who is now dead, where all things hurry—
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss