How it started — Summary

spiderlings before we were dust how we crawled

while you watched the sunset i watched darkness climb the trees

though the sky never really gets dark any more

i began growing a hump as a form of protest

and now it looms invisibly over my every croak and cry

i call it O for Oblivion as well as the Obvious

what i thought were spiderlings was the detritus of their eggs

in the right light anything can look promising

as did you and i before we were dust

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The poem begins with a memory of crawling like spiderlings, small and hopeful, back when the speaker and a "you" were somehow already headed toward dust. While the other person watched a sunset, the speaker watched darkness creep up the trees, which suggests a mind drawn to what is ending rather than what is glowing. The speaker then describes a hump, grown "as a form of protest," that now looms invisibly over every croak and cry. The humor is dry, but the weight is real: it reads like a bent-over, aging, or burdened way of living.

The speaker names this hump "O," for Oblivion and the Obvious, treating death as both a dread and a plain fact. The turn comes near the end. What looked like living spiderlings turns out to be the leftover shell of their eggs. The closing lines admit that in the right light, anything can look promising, including the two people themselves. The mood is wry, quiet, and disillusioned, with a little tenderness left over.

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