Knifeless knife — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

hot summer night itching even where nothing itches

wind from the west the sound of metal striking metal

I found a knife in the woods. Or more accurately, I found an old, tooled leather sheath for a knife with the remains of a hilt sticking out of it.

The top of the hilt was the only thing visible; the knife had been stuck into the ground, wedged between a couple of rocks. The way you’d hide something if you meant to come back for it later: inconspicuous, but not completely invisible. It’s on the far side (from us, toward the valley) of the higher ridge, near a stand of old sassafras trees where I sometimes dig sassafras roots, so it’s tempting to think the knife had something to do with that. But more likely it was used by someone poaching deer.

I love how fungal it is, already half-transformed back into earth. I returned it to its hiding place so the process can continue.

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Dave Bonta's piece begins with a small, restless haiku-like scene: a hot night, an itch that has no cause. Then comes a line about wind and the sound of metal striking metal, which sets up an uneasy, slightly metallic atmosphere before the prose takes over.

The prose tells a simple story. The speaker finds an old leather sheath in the woods, with the remains of a hilt poking out, wedged between rocks. The speaker guesses at its use, wondering about sassafras digging but settling on deer poaching as likelier. What stands out is the final turn. Instead of taking the object home, the speaker admires how it is "half-transformed back into earth" and puts it back so the decay can go on.

The mood is quiet, curious, and a little restless, then calm. The speaker seems to feel respect more than ownership, content to let the woods finish their slow work. The title, "Knifeless knife," fits an object that is already more fungus and soil than blade.

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