Mission creep — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

i watch from under my umbrella

the complexly bladed ferns dancing erratically in the rain

my feet and their forever war on stasis

the ruts reasserting themselves through fresh stone

i was only going for a walk and now

i’m pondering the obligations of ferns the prerogatives of feet

and the way a green tongue snakes through everything

as if wisdom grew on trees as if it were made of gray paper

a head-sized tumor emitting hornets

or the way rain beads on a jewelweed leaf

unable to find purchase on such a smooth skin

it rolls and gathers into the veins

microcosms in capsule form

my pace slows to a creep

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The speaker sets out on a simple walk in the rain and ends up lost in thought. Under an umbrella, they watch ferns sway in the wet and think about their own feet, which keep pushing against stillness. The title, "Mission creep," names the joke: a plain stroll keeps expanding into bigger questions, like what ferns owe the world or what feet are entitled to do.

The images then drift in odd directions. Wisdom is imagined as something that grows on trees, then as gray paper, then as a "head-sized tumor / emitting hornets," a startling, unsettling picture of how thinking can swell and sting. The poem settles on something small and exact: rain beading on a jewelweed leaf, gathering into its veins, a tiny world held in a drop.

The mood is playful, curious, and a little uneasy. By the end the speaker's pace has slowed "to a creep," so the walk's mission has quietly become paying attention.

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