Lonesome Water Revisited — Summary

All the while i sat watching the rocks, a spider was right behind me mending her web, knowing i offered protection from the birds. You’re never as alone as you think. I hear water trickling underground, remember that fateful drink and grin. It’s not so lonesome i could cry. And when i do, it’s just to talk back to coyotes, or that family of barred owls who hoot like chimpanzees. When the sun goes down, the hollow turns strange. Jumping mice dance in the moonlight. A whippoorwill clears his throat three times before he launches into his diatribe. Corpses of trees glow with foxfire and flying squirrels whistle high and thin like ghosts—whose ghosts, one can never be sure. Once i found a green stone that had been worked, given an edge that could still scrape a hide. It fit so easily into my hand. It took all my willpower to put it back into its hole. The original owner might not be done with it yet.

three-toed root— they’re saying my name in Raven

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A speaker sits in a quiet, wild place and slowly realizes how crowded it is. A spider quietly works behind them, a hidden stream trickles underground, and owls, coyotes, mice and squirrels fill the night. The line "You're never as alone as you think" sets the idea early, and the rest of the poem shows it. Loneliness softens into something close to companionship, even humor: the speaker cries only to answer the coyotes, and the whippoorwill's call becomes a "diatribe."

As dark falls, the mood shifts from cozy to eerie. Foxfire glows on dead trees, and the whistling squirrels sound like ghosts nobody can name. The worked green stone, still sharp enough to scrape a hide, brings in another presence: a person from long ago. The speaker feels awe and a little guilt, so they put it back, aware it may still belong to someone. The closing haiku, where roots seem to say the speaker's name "in Raven," suggests the place has been paying attention all along, and has begun to accept them.

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