Hollow Folk — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

without issue i can feel the forest thicken within me

build up fuel and hunger for that incendiary spark

ah to slash and burn plow and harrow with my ancestors

or cut down the old giants and replace them with windmills

deadly flowers scything the air for migrants

our doom laid out like a meal for ravens

fates intertwining like fingers at a lovers’ leap

a mile and a half up a mountain hollow under the green banners of the sun

I live above a crawl space too poor for a cellar

my garden is a banquet for slugs and meadow voles

the wild mountain mint hums with solitary bees

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The speaker lives in a remote mountain hollow, and the poem moves between a restless, almost violent inner urge and a quieter, humbler picture of daily life. Early on, the speaker feels the forest growing inside them, building "fuel and hunger" for a spark. That longing leads to dreams of slashing, burning and plowing like the ancestors, or of replacing old trees with windmills. Even the windmills are described as "deadly flowers" that cut the air for migrating birds, so the poem doesn't offer a clean, innocent solution. Human progress and human appetite both look dangerous, and "our doom laid out like a meal for ravens" sounds a grim note.

Then the tone settles. The speaker admits to living above a crawl space, too poor for a cellar, with a garden that feeds slugs and voles. The ending, with mint humming with solitary bees, is gentle and alive. The mood is wary and wistful, but it finds a modest peace in sharing the land with other creatures.

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