Ravished — Summary

missing heads and shrivelled petals orotund with seed

corn-fed on extra syllables trapped between the teeth

nearly reptilian our rictus of gratitude for another sun

let us trust the rust within us to paint our noble ruins red

as knotweed blossoms into lace and devil’s-tail brandishes blue fruit

immune to anything that ravishes without or within

they spread like miracules their missionary impositions

as we lower our last dreams into the earth

we who were never beautiful but were sensitive to beauty

our lanterns in the dark so sleek and next-generation

are monitoring our every flicker for signs of life

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Bonta's poem begins in a ruined garden: headless flowers, dried petals, seed-heavy pods. From there it widens into a picture of people who are worn down but still, oddly, grateful to see another day. The speaker says "us" and "we", so the voice is collective, and it admits something unflattering: we were "never beautiful / but were sensitive to beauty."

The mood is wry and weary, with a streak of defiance. The speaker invites us to "trust the rust" to paint our ruins red, turning decay into a kind of color. Invasive plants like knotweed bloom with a strange energy, spreading like missionaries and shrugging off whatever harms them. People, by contrast, bury their last dreams. The ending adds a chill: sleek, modern "lanterns" watch our every flicker for signs of life. Judging by the imagery, this may point to technology that monitors us, leaving the poem both tender and uneasy.

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